During the recent PfS introduction days the students got the opportunity to write a very short piece of writing about themselves or something important to them. We emphasised the need to ensure that the opening sentences of our pieces drew the reader into wanting to know more. There is only one opening line so we need to make the most of it! Here are some good examples. Click through to read more!

Megan - Cola is as fast as a racing car but Basil likes his snacks.
Amrinda - Aman, the young two-year-old girl, was as tiny as a breadcrumb when she was born.
Max - “Arrrrggh….” I screamed as I fell to the freezing-cold ground.
Alex - Formula One is fast and sometimes hard to keep up with. Yet it is awesomely exciting. The thrill makes my heart race almost as fast as the cars themselves.
George - Smashing the ball past the keeper, rattling the back of the net to win the cup, is the best feeling ever.
Anna - Street dance is a passion.
Joe - Food technology is my life.
Jacob - Kicking a football is the best feeling in the world - actually doing something rather than sitting at home.
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Here are some Fordy examples inspired by the writing of the students at the time.
Fordy1 - Devouring chocolate cake is a passionate of mine, secondary only to watching Everton Football club win the Merseyside Derby!
Fordy2 - Playing for Everton Football Club is my dream but it is slowly slipping away as the years pass. I have to face the truth - I am probably not ever going to lead the attack in the Merseyside Derby!